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May 31, 2009

How To Write An Ivy League Admissions Essay

The Common App is a limited document. You only have so much space to provide your answers and input. Of course, you can provide some supplemental materials, but in truth, your only opportunity for self-expression will be in the essays. There are two of them: one generic, and one that is specific to school.

By following these Five Essential Tips, you will be able to produce an essay that will greatly enhance your chance of admittance in a top school.

1. Paint a clear picture of yourself. Tell about your personality and accomplishments. This is much more effective than telling a good story.

An applicant may submit a very wonderful essay recounting childhood experiences and family tales; however, this sort of essay does not tell the examiner the two things that are necessary in determining whether or not to admit an applicant.

-It did not tell me about anything the applicant had accomplished. -It only gave me an idea of one aspect of the applicant’s personality.

The essay, while quite good, contributed to this applicant being waitlisted.

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2. Talk yourself up!

It is typical of overachievers to be modest. They tend to make the least of their spectacular accomplishments with statements like:

“Naturally, there are many others who are just as worthy as I am of attending Harvard, if not more so.”

Or the equally self-deprecating,

“I know it will be pure luck if I am accepted to Stanford.”

You know very well these things aren’t true, so don’t say them.

Naturally, you don’t want to be full of yourself and lord your accomplishments over others, but be equally careful not to be too modest. You have accomplished a great deal, or you wouldn’t be applying to a prestigious school. Make the most of your accomplishments. Be proud of the prizes you have won and the goals you have achieved. Put your best foot forward.

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3. Share your life stories.

Sharing appropriate anecdotes about your life is very effective and memorable. The essay about the family that adopted dogs is a case in point. Even though it didn’t help that applicant, I still remember it. If you share stories of your life in a way that showcases your personality and your accomplishments, it will go a long way toward getting your application accepted.

4. Don’t bother to tell about shortcomings and failures. These things are not pertinent to the process. Tell about your successes.

This is not the place to share the fact that you only got third place in the first track meet you ever participated in. The only exception to this would be if that event acted as the springboard to your winning the state championship.

Your childhood accomplishments, while charming, are not pertinent to your essay unless they led to further accomplishments in your high school career. If winning a prize for the best science project in 6th grade led you to enter and win a national competition later on, be sure to point it out. If not, omit it.

5. Name-dropping is not impressive.

Avoid saying things like:

“I know Fred Smith, who is a freshman here at Harvard. He is a very dedicated student, whom I deeply admire. That is why I am most interested in attending Harvard.”

If you happen to know the name of one of a professor or well-known alumnus, it is not helpful to insert it in your essay.

If you need to mention a person’s name because it is necessary to the sense of the story you are telling, do so. Otherwise, it is best to avoid it.

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May 14, 2009

Why recommendation letters are critical for Harvard and Stanford admissions

Letters of rec are probably the most underlerveraged (and consequently underutilized) tools in the Ivy League admissions process.

There’s a simple reason why – most students are afraid of their teachers/coaches/bosses. They’re afraid of requesting what they really want – an incredible, memorable letter of rec that highlights strengths and re-affirms the student’s spike.

Part of the solution is to get over yourself. Be courageous. That’s something personal that this article won’t be able to help you achieve.

But I can help you with the actual steps. And following these steps will markedly increase your chance of getting the exact letter of recommendation you’d hoped for – one that Stanford, Harvard, and the best schools around the world will enjoy reading.

Here are the steps:

1. Identify the teachers/coaches who a) know you well and b) you were the strongest performer in their classes. These recommenders will always write the best letters. Hopefully they’re the same people that sponsor afterschool activities in which you participate. If not, approach some of them to sponsor new clubs that you’d be starting.

2. Have your parents meet with that teacher/coach. I didn’t do this, but in retrospect I should have. Teacher-parent conferences are a helpful way to strengthen the student-teacher connection, and a great way for parents to indirectly express their concerns/wishes (and their kid’s wishes) to the teacher. Just make sure this type of meeting isn’t too aggressive. I actually remember reading teacher recommendations which casually referenced controlling parents…these don’t go over too well with your plans to get into Harvard

3. Prepare a packet addressed individually to that teacher. In a letter, talk about the following things:

-What universities and why – in more than just a few words

-Why you’d like that teacher to write the recommendation

-A few achievements that you’re most proud of, and any successes that were either in that teacher’s classes or sponsored clubs

-What your overall story is for the Ivy Leagues

4. Prepare a brag-sheet. This should be the exact same one for Common Applications. Attach this for additional context

5. Schedule an in-person meeting with your teacher when asking them to write the recommendation. In this talk, make sure you cover items similar to Step #3 – why you’re applying to Ivy League universities, why you think you should get in, what your story is that you’re telling admissions readers, and why you thought they’d be a great recommender. Don’t simply ask them to write a letter, smile politely, and leave it at that. This in-person meeting is crucial to providing your teacher more info about your particular interests

6. GIVE YOUR TEACHER PLENTY OF TIME TO WRITE THE LETTER. A week is too fast. A month should be fine. This is yet another example of how early planning is necessary for Ivy League colleges

7. Followup politely. If you haven’t heard a response from Mrs. Davidson or Mr. Gonzalez and there’s 4 weeks before application deadlines, politely inquire about the status of your rec

8. Thank them profusely! Give them a little card and/or gift to express your appreciation. After all, this may not be the last time you’ll ask for their help and they’ve just done something for which they receive nothing in return

Step 5 is particularly critical. Do everything else wrong, but as long as you execute Step 5 well, your recommender will have the info and context they require to write something thats personal and shows they care. After reading thousands of these letters, you can quickly spot the genuine, heartfelt ones versus the form ones.

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April 25, 2009

Is Kindle the Best Ebook Reader?

The Kindle is awesome. Books can be downloaded to Kindle in less than a minute, while magazines, newspapers and blogs are delivered to subscribers automatically. Books you purchase can also be read on Kindle and Kindle 2, Amazons portable readers that wirelessly download books, newspapers, magazines, and blogs to a crisp, high-resolution 6-inch electronic-paper display that looks and reads like real paper.

Kindle’s paperback size and expandable memory let you travel light with your library. Kindle has six adjustable font sizes to suit your reading preference. Kindle lets you download and read the beginning of any book for free.

Kindle has a new easy-to-use 5-way controller, enabling precise on-screen navigation for selecting text to highlight or looking up words. Kindle makes it easy to search within a book, across your library, in the Kindle Store, or even the Web. Kindle’s Basic Web browser works well to read simple, text-centric Web sites such as Google and Wikipedia.

Kindle is as easy to hold and use as a book. Books, newspapers, magazines and blogs are loaded onto the device wirelessly via Amazons free EVDO network (called WhisperNet) and are published in a proprietary format for the Kindle. Books take less than a minute to download, and their prices vary; new releases and New York Times bestsellers cost $10.

Kindle has a (somewhat primitive, at least compared to iPhone) browsing environment, but according to the Kindle User Guide, it does Javascript, SSL, and cookies, and supports downloading of a couple formats including unprotected MOBI files and TXT. Kindle Content Management: Baby Steps Forward Although Amazon fell short of fulfilling Kindle owners’ hopes for user-defined folders or Google-style labeling to help manage Kindle content, there is a half-measure of improvement in content management functionality.

Unlike WiFi, Kindle utilizes the same high-speed data network (EVDO) as advanced cell phones so you never have to locate a hotspot. Wireless Access with Whispernet&8482Whispernet utilizes Amazon’s optimized technology plus Sprint’s national high-speed (EVDO) data network to enable you to wirelessly search, discover, download, and read content on the go. The Kindle hardware devices use an electronic paper display and download content over Amazon Whispernet using the Sprint EVDO network.

The Sony PRS-505 ($300) is the sleeker of the two devices, the Kindle is the more revolutionary in that it has a free built-in wireless connection that allows you to tap into Amazon’s vast online bookstore from just about anywhere you can access Sprint’s EVDO cellular data network.

There is also still no Wi-Fi access, but, as with the first version, with its 3G cellular radio (supplied by Sprint) Kindle owners can purchase any of Amazons 230,000 titles anywhere where there is a signal from Sprint’s data network. Since its connected to Sprints wireless network, you can use it almost anywhere in the U.S..

Thanks to electronic paper, a revolutionary new display technology, reading Kindle’s screen is as sharp and natural as reading ink on paper and nothing like the strain and glare of a computer screen. I have ordered multiple Kindles to use in our family. Kindle remains by far the best dedicated ebook reader out there, and based on how often they sold out of original Kindles, Amazon will sell as many of these as they can make. You can also synchronize data between Kindles, and with the Whispersync system, you’ll likely soon be able to push books between mobile devices, like phones and maybe even netbooks.

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